There is a lot of room to walk around
So many clothes, shoes, and other accessories
Everything looks amazing
So many colors surrounding you
You feel like you want to buy everything you see
You have this awesome feeling inside as you look around
You feel great walking out of the store with the items you purchased
Confessions of a Shopoholic by Sophie Kinsella
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I have not read the book but i saw the movie. The last line " you feel great walking out of the store with the items you purchased" reminds me of the beginning of the movie. I think this is short but its good. I found it interesting in the first part of the poem the last three lines it either starts with "So" or "Everything" and then the last one all begins with "you"
ReplyDeleteI think this poem can be even more fun. Are we in a closet or a store? What colors do you see? What does it smell like? What sounds do you hear? Help me experience this place.
ReplyDeleteI like your descriptions of feelings in the second stanza. Greed. Desire. Keep going!
I feel like this poem has alot running through your mind. So many things to buy at once like you just don't know what to do. That stuff is actually stressful to people.
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