Monday, March 16, 2009
staying home from school
You wake up feeling sick. You feel your forehead and it feels warm under your cold hands. When your mom comes in to make sure you are awake you tell her you don't feel well. She makes you take your temperature but you are not sick. You try to get out of bed but you feel dizzy and almost fall down. You are extremely tired and feel run down. All you want to do is get back in bed and sleep the day away. Your mom lets you stay home and rushes out of the house to go to work. You get back in bed and fall asleep again. All of a sudden your alarm clock goes off. You wake up and realize this was all a dream. You wish you could stay home. You are very paranoid and don't want to go to school.
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I like the fact that you choose a unexpected thing topic. Meaning you choose to make it like a deja vu type expirence. I know you know its short but maybe there is a way to expend on it a little more. I still think you did a good job and it shows that you tried thinking out of the box
ReplyDeleteI like how the person is paranoid because people feel that way sometimes so it relates to them.
ReplyDeleteI liked how at the end of the story it's all a dream. It put an interesting twist on the story.
ReplyDeleteI like how what is happening in your story is actually a dream...it added a creative twist tor your story! I was not expecting the story to end that way.
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