One day a young couple had trouble selling the remains of their fruits and vegetables. They were not having a good week with growing their crops due to the terrible drought that had ocurred during the passed week. Since selling their crops was the only way the Robinsons were able to make money, the couple started to get poorer and poorer. The Robinsons were hoping to start a family but would not be able to support the baby due to their lack of money. As time went by, matters only seemed to be getting worse. They still were not able to grow any crops and did not have anything to sell for money. Their house was also growing older and weaker and started to fall apart. The Robinsons did not have enought money to fix up their old house. The farm was no longer growing any products. The Robinsons kept hoping and praying every night that things would get better for them.
All of a sudden, their lives changed when they walked outside and felt a few drops of water drip onto their faces. The rain felt so good on their skin in the hot day that it was. The Robinsons looked up to the sky only to see big rain clouds and the rain started to pour down on them. They started jumping up and down in joy. They were extremely happy that their farm was now getting enought water to hopefully come back to life. After a few days, their farm did start to get better. The Robinsons noticed plants growing up through the dirt in the field. Fruits and vegetables started growing again as well. Miraculously, people started coming to their farm again to buy their products. The people were very thankful to be able to eat these fruits and vegetables again.
Eventually the Robinsons were able to make enought money to fix up their old house. Their farm looked younger again and things were getting a lot better. They happily were able to start their family and had and adorable baby girl. They were able to support their child with the money they made from their farm. In the end, they were a happy family and were lucky to have what they had.
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I think that you have a really good plot with this story. I told you before that I think you should try and add more detail to it. Otherwise it is clear that in the end things may be tough but can get better. So good job!
ReplyDeleteI like how this story was made a happy one at the end. It was very creative with the fruits and vegetables growing. I thought that was good.
ReplyDeleteI liked this story a lot. In the end I was happy for the poor family who had nothing due to the drought.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this story very much. I am glad that the family eventually recovered. Good job making it realistic
ReplyDeleteAt first, this story seems to be very fairytale-like, but by the end of the story, it relates to reality. I like the happy ending!
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